Saturday, May 24, 2008

CHAPTER TWO

Kathy looks like she was told to look scared. And she didn't know how.


What the hell is mack shit? I need me a dictionary all up in here.


Click. Who sings the sound you make when you hang up the phone? Really. I wish I'd written this.


Oh no! Who is on the phone!? Why are they coming back? I think I remember this part.


Okay, he is going to shoot both of them because he doesn't know who is walking up the stairs? I don't know how people with guns roll but this is silly.

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